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This song is really well made, and I appreciate the glide bass in the verses. I like the soundscape you've built up, and how you take an idea and build it up along the way.

I suggest you take some liberties with things like time, tempo, and rhythm to make it super captivating! Right now, you're doing a lot of simply staying within your loop and I encourage you to break it once in a while to do something unexpected. Don't get me wrong, it is a very tasty loop though.

Also at the end when the drums go through the moving lowpass filter, the snare starts to get a little fucked up, maybe clipping distortion?

On one hand I am incredibly impressed that you managed to do this in FL trial mode; I didn't even know you could load external plugins in trial mode.

On the other hand, this song is very harsh. Around 1:22 is where I had to stop lol. There's so much harsh ringing and it almost feels painful. I really like the sound design, but I can't listen to it and enjoy it. I appreciate the warning, so I turned it down, but it's still harsh.

Damn, this is a very polished work of art... sound design, organization, composition, mixing, and mastering is all on point.

Awesome track. Surely you listen to Au5.

How on earth do you have the drive to make 7:38 of this stuff

I really like the idea you have and the olskool dubstep sound design

I'm not a fan of the repetitiveness, the choice of drums, or the mixing. this track has a lot of potential to be really huge and banging, but it wasn't so much. Switch up the composition every now and then for a more interesting track, get drums with more smack and high end, and put more care into your available stereo space. You'll be amazed at how much the mixing itself will help

GG64 responds:

ty for the feedback though!! comments like this really help me out, i really appreciate it

only docking for mix clarity

I really like your lyrics, your overall composition and your delivery. You clearly had a point to make and I think you made it effectively. Listening was engaging, well done

bobenshibobsled responds:

if you have any suggestions for what i could do to make the mix better, please pm me or hmu on discord (in my bio) i appreciate the feedback!

HELLO POTATO MAN VII

As far as mixing goes, everything is clear and discernable. I'll say you have plenty of leeway for the bass frequencies, do don't be shy to put stuff down there! Also the stereo space has plenty of room too! I suggest doubling or layering instruments to make things like growl basses bigger

very nice atmospheres and vibes you got going around tho :3

MrSpud8 responds:

Glad it's decent, I'm usually worried about having too much bass so it's interesting to hear that it's actually kinda low. As for spacing, I kinda just realized I forgot to add a panning effect to the background synth in the first drop, as well as just more panning in general lol (Thank you, Red Frog XLIX)

I really like how evolving this song is, very atmospheric and moving.

I can tell you paid attention to every detail and ear candy, well done. I especially like your avant-garde approach to the words in this song, not being lyrics but a monologue. It fits the style.

Of course mixing, mastering, and all that are splendid as well

LastDayDreaming responds:

thanks, mate! I wanted this song to be an expression of my feelings at this moment with Last Day Dreaming, and this is the result I got, I'm glad to know that I I managed to express it in a proper way!

This is really cool, mixed really well, and it's energetic

I suggest you put a little more care into crafting sounds that maybe make a little more sense with each other or making them flow better. there is a fine line between "bass design" and "random sounds" so tread it carefully

Casporb responds:

Thanks for the advice!

banan a 🍌

that bass is WACKY

only complaint is that in the more chaotic parts it's a little difficult to grasp everything going on, other than that, this is very well done :)

ZaneLittle responds:

Very valid. Thank you for the feedback and the kind words!

Hi! I'm M⅄YA (or just Maya). I use FL Studio to make epic electronic music >:3
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Maya @MYYA

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University of Central Missouri

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