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[last day (dreaming)]

I really like how evolving this song is, very atmospheric and moving.

I can tell you paid attention to every detail and ear candy, well done. I especially like your avant-garde approach to the words in this song, not being lyrics but a monologue. It fits the style.

Of course mixing, mastering, and all that are splendid as well

LastDayDreaming responds:

thanks, mate! I wanted this song to be an expression of my feelings at this moment with Last Day Dreaming, and this is the result I got, I'm glad to know that I I managed to express it in a proper way!

[Casporb - 100 MPH]

This is really cool, mixed really well, and it's energetic

I suggest you put a little more care into crafting sounds that maybe make a little more sense with each other or making them flow better. there is a fine line between "bass design" and "random sounds" so tread it carefully

Casporb responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[SLICE OF LIFE]

banan a 🍌

[Detour]

that bass is WACKY

only complaint is that in the more chaotic parts it's a little difficult to grasp everything going on, other than that, this is very well done :)

ZaneLittle responds:

Very valid. Thank you for the feedback and the kind words!

[Backup Plan (Feat. Sergi Yaro)]

this really reminds me of future bass from like NCS, that bouncy style

mixing could use some work

[Fantasy]

this song is very groovy and the vocal work is great, I can tell you spent a while on them, either that or they were pre-made lol

the groove in the drop is very captivating and specifically the drums are mixed very well

there's a couple things I would work on, specifically the repetitiveness of the drops, especially the first one, and then also in the first drop there's like this wub wub bass that pulled me out for a second because it didn't seem to fit. compositionally I like it, but when elements are by themselves, they're usually more compelling when they're fuller sounding. this goes especially for basses

also the supersaw in the second drop could be a lot crisper but that's just personal preference

Mauxus responds:

Hi Rougetoad49, thank you so much for listening and taking the time to leave feedback. Those pointers you left will definitely help me finishing up the track, I appreciate it. I did spend a lot of time on the track. Most of the instruments were manually made in Serum.

[Retake]

The mix is really bright like I would expect EDM to be, and I love the style and composition you've done

The vocal performance and delivery is wonderful, but the work done to them is rough around the edges... I suggest you take a little more time to make them fit in the mix

The lyrical composition is a little strange, which I'm not going to dock from the score for, but I'll mention that there are some norms within the world of lyrics that I think could help if you were aware of. I only recently implemented that into my own music, so it sticks out to me

I'll elaborate if you happen to care, you can message me

[Bloom]

it's really cool and I like the arrangement and sound design, but it also feels very unfinished and there isn't much content to this track

clearly you do love that break though lol

[Dieswyx - Upset by Pixels Remix by Bassclefff]

I love the variety of elements and the specific sounds you've used, and my only complaint really is that there are some mega harsh high frequencies in that break that kinda pull me out of the experience.

Really cool stuff going on, though

[Zoftle x Matei - Adrenaline]

this is crazy lol